Hi, my name is Jun, and I'm fourteen years old. I lived in Seoul until seven years old .Then my family and I went to China Beijing because my father's was transferred by his work company . Since then I live in China. I study at a Chinese school which is called Ren Da Fu Zhong. It is a pretty famous middle school in Beijing as I study in Chiniese Mandarin language , I'm not very good at English. ,That;s why I came to GLPS camp to improve my speaking skills and writing skills.Now I am going to write about my hobby and visiting XIAN.
My hobby is playing soccer.and my favorite soccer player is Messy. The biggest
reason why I like him is because he plays soccer well. Of course, my best team is F.C.Barcelona.

VISITING XIAN

I visited XIAN( a city of China.)when I was ten years old.XIAN was a capital city of the China,but now It changed into Beijing.
TERRACOTTA WARRIOR.
I think the best thing to see in XIAN is terracotta warrior. I heard that all of the warriors were real people, but they all be buried alive. They all be buried alive when the Qin emperor died. Qin emperor ordered those people to protect him after he died, so those people died with him. Warrior in this picture is not real person.

You can see that every warrior faces are different.
Basketball I also like basketball,but I am not good at it.
My favorite basketball player is Michel Jordan
Why I like him is because,he plays well!!
This is me!Jun .
Nice to meet you Jun Hee and thanks for sharing your interests on your post. Writing a bit more about your favorite soccer team & player as well as introducing Basket ball as another hobby in your introduction would provide the reader with more information about yourself. You have illustrated your introduction well. Keep up the good work :)
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